Archive for the ‘Storytelling’ Category

How Do You Find Writing Success?

September 4, 2015

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Relax. Write. Enjoy.
Every few years someone becomes a million-seller with a first novel, and many writers and wannabes believe lightning can strike them, too (writers tend to be an optimistic breed … they always expect to win).

My advice?

Drop expectations of mega-success. If everyone who writes a novel expects to be the next [insert your favorite highly successful writer here], then almost everyone who tries will be disappointed.

Only a handful of writers every decade get noticed at that level.

Stop Being Delusional
If you want to know why readers clamor for those best-sellers … study them. I think the best advice I could give you is to read the stories you like over-and-over until you figure out how they entranced you (trust me, it wasn’t luck).

Know where you are in learning the craft, and figure out how to get to your goal. Writing is a business. Study that part of it, too. Then have a plan, and work on it.

Be obsessed about your writing. Practice it.

Figure out your goals. Not just for today or this week. Break it into chunks … weekly, monthly, yearly and beyond. Work on making your own writing as entrancing as the stories you love.

Once you achieve one of your goals, look to the next goal as the measure of your success, and keep moving.

Keep practicing … and keep writing.

Remember, the only way to become proficient in something is to do it over-and-over again, always trying to improve.

Do It for the Right Reason
If you’re going to choose to do something, and obsess about it, then do it for the love of it. Not because you’ll be famous or renowned … but because it’s part of who you are and what you do.

That’s how you learn to be the best storyteller in the business.

Do the work.

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Enjoy the holiday weekend. I’m off to my middle son’s wedding. He’s found a lovely, intelligent young lady who seems to believe he’s every bit as special as he thinks she is.

I think it’s marvelous … and it ain’t just good ol’ Dad talking. It’s the only real reason to do something about it.

Love.

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BTW – I’ll have that podcast I promised, answering your questions, when I get back. Stay tuned.

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The Official Book Trailer for “Street Light”

Reviews are in for my latest novel, “Street Light.” One is from Top Book Reviewers and the other is posted by Readers Favorite. I’ll let them speak for themselves.

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My books have all garnered some terrific reviews. You can see the stories I have available by using the Amazon link below.

buy now amazon

You’re also invited to visit my web site, BROKEN GLASS, or like my Book of Face page. You can also follow my shorter ramblings on The Twitter.

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Comments posted below will be read, greatly appreciated and perhaps even answered.

Where Do Story Ideas Come From?

August 11, 2015

Summer Joy

Where to Start?
One of the most common questions a published writer is asked is where they get their story ideas. New writers sometimes think ideas just pop into an author’s head … or else they use some secret formula.

Many newbies think if they could learn this magic technique they could write best-sellers, too.

But fully-formed story ideas don’t just pop into an author’s head. Not usually, anyway. Nor do those authors have some magic formula.

They don’t need one. The truth is they probably already have more great ideas than they could ever write.

Great Ideas Come From the Act of Writing
Every how-to book on writing will tell you what you need is a solid premise. What they rarely tell you is where this story idea comes from in the first place.

This often causes a great deal of frustration in beginning writers because of the mistaken belief that the creation of a solid story idea is an event.

Theoretically, I suppose it could happen that a story would pop into the mind of a writer fully formed. But sitting in front of a blank page waiting for inspiration to strike is not a recipe for success.

The truth is that coming up with a full, rich story idea is a process. Knowing this is the key to generating ideas. Once you free yourself from the concept of a story idea as an event, you’ll be amazed at how much there is to write about.

The Secret to Endless Ideas
The secret to generating ideas is the same “secret” that solves every writing problem: writing itself. You can start with almost anything you find interesting and collect ideas as you go through your daily life.

Maybe it’s a location that fascinates you, a likable (or despicable) character you know, a clever line of dialogue you hear, or even a great title. You actually need very little inspiration to start writing. I started my fourth novel after imagining a great last sentence!

Hopefully, you’ll begin to notice when things you see or hear give you that little tingle that says there’s something there worth exploring. Pay attention and jot it down.

Write First, Edit Later
When you sit down later to write, just pick one of your notes and begin writing about it … what it makes you think of, how it makes you feel, what questions it raises … and write fast.

One of the keys to idea generation (and writing in general) is to write as quickly as you can. You don’t want to analyze anything yet. You want a volume of words on the page.

Even if you find yourself writing about something completely different from what you originally started … just go with it. The idea is not to stress about structure, not to analyze where the story is going, not even to think about it as a story yet.

You want volume, varied thoughts, and a wealth of possibilities. Don’t make any decisions; just stay open and receptive to whatever comes. You will be amazed at what’s in your brain just waiting to spill out onto the page.

How it Works
This process of starting with story nuggets and expanding them is the core of story idea generation. Stephen King wrote about it in his fabulous book On Writing. If you haven’t read it yet, you should.

As you explore your story nuggets, ask questions and follow your answers wherever they lead. Don’t try to force your thoughts into a story yet. Keep things loose and continue asking and answering questions. Feel free to backtrack and choose different answers.

And remember to write a lot. Volume is your friend. Ask a question, answer it, repeat. Keep at it for a few sessions and you will be amazed at the material you’ll generate.

By feeding your brain a fertile mountain of images, characters and possibilities it goes to work trying to make sense of it all. This process is the truth of where great story ideas come from. It’s like magic when it happens, and I promise it happens every single time.

A Bottomless Well of Ideas
You may find yourself coming up with multiple story ideas based on the same initial nugget … and that’s great! Choose one idea and work on it until it’s done. File the others for later use.

When the pros say they have more ideas than they could ever work on in a lifetime they aren’t merely showing off (well, maybe some of them are … a little), it’s simply that the process of working on one idea always creates new ideas.

That’s the secret to a lifetime of story ideas.
 

The Official Book Trailer for “Street Light”

New reviews are in for my latest novel, “Street Light.” One is from Top Book Reviewers and the other is posted by Readers Favorite. I’ll let them speak for themselves.

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My books have garnered some terrific reviews. You can see the stories I have available by using the Amazon link below.

buy now amazon

You’re also invited to visit my web site, BROKEN GLASS, or like my Book of Face page. You can also follow my shorter ramblings on The Twitter.

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Comments posted below will be read, greatly appreciated and perhaps even answered.

Do You Let Your Dialogue Do The Talking?

July 19, 2015

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Bring Your Story to Life
I’ve never met a fiction author who hasn’t wanted the reader to get completely lost in the words he put on the page (for a writer there’s no better feeling). You want the reader to suspend his disbelief.

As every writer knows (or soon learns), it’s important for readers to know who’s actually talking in any given scene. Obviously, it’s dialogue that tells us what people say and hints at what they do not. It actually goes a step further … and encourages readers to supply their own take on how the spoken words are exchanged.

In other words, dialogue brings a story to life. A writer who cannot make characters talk, and have their conversations require us to listen, has a story that is less than perfect.

In the ever-present writer’s world of “oh shit, did I just screw that up?” every good fiction writer quickly learns there’s nothing as terrible as stiff, unrealistic dialogue to pull a reader right out of the story.

You never want that to happen … but it isn’t always the words your characters speak that create the difficulty. Often it’s the way you describe them.

Dialogue Tags are Often the Problem
When dialogue happens in your story, you want the focus to be on the conversation. You don’t want readers to get distracted by the tag. Dialogue tags are not the place to get creative. You want the reader to pass right over them, as if they’re not there.

If you’re smart, that is.

That’s because dialogue tags exist for only one purpose: to identify for the reader who is speaking at any given time in your manuscript.

That’s it.

Yet, this is one of the most common mistakes new writers make. First, they overuse them. It’s almost as if they think every statement has to have an attribution … as if who was speaking in some of them wasn’t totally obvious.

Worse, some newbies think simple words like asked or said are boring or repetitive, so they will wrack their brains trying to come up with more interesting alternatives.

C’mon … it’s OK to smile … you know you’ve done it. I have, too.

But dialogue tags are not the place to get fancy. Dialogue tags should melt into the background. “Said” and “asked” are usually all you need.

However, repeating those tags after every portion of every verbal exchange gets a bit tiresome.

Worse, by doing so you run the very real risk of driving readers right out of your story … a cardinal sin … since it may even make them decide not to finish reading at all.

The Whole Truth
Unfortunately, there’s a tendency for the new writer to use adverbs in their dialogue tags, too. Which is sad, because that’s guaranteed to take the reader out of the story. Stephen King, a writer who knows how to tell a story, is famously quoted as saying “The road to Hell is paved with adverbs.” So is the road to a clunky story.

When you’re telling them what happens, rather than letting them see it for themselves, they’re never really in the story.

If you think you need an adverb to convey emotion, your scene probably needs to be re-written so the character’s dialogue and actions more clearly express it.

It’s the difference between telling and showing.

An Example
“I’ve had enough,” Richard said angrily.

That tells us Richard is angry … but that emotion isn’t demonstrated at all through his actions or the dialogue itself. Adding the adverb angrily doesn’t do it, either.

If you want the reader to feel Richard’s anger, you have to show them through the dialogue itself. Here’s how you might do it:

“You disgust me. This conversation is over,” Richard said.

Here, Richard’s words themselves are angry, so you don’t need to rely on the adverb to convey it. The dialogue is stronger and the emotion is clear. You could also include some brief actions or descriptions to eliminate the adverb and better convey the character’s emotion.

Richard shoved back his chair and slammed his fist on the table. “I’ve had enough,” he said, clenching his jaw. “This discussion is over.”

The actions and description here show how Richard feels, so you can easily eliminate the adverb and stop telling the action.

Let the reader into your story by showing it to him.

Make sense? Try it.

 
The Official Book Trailer for “Street Light” 

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I’ll be at a book-signing event at the Sterling Heights (Michigan) Public Library on Saturday, July 25. Stop on by. Click here for a map.

By the way, a couple of new reviews just came in for my latest novel, “Street Light.” One is from Top Book Reviewers and the other is posted on both Goodreads and Readers Favorite. I’ll let them speak for themselves.
 

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My books have garnered some terrific reviews. You can see the stories I have available by using the Amazon link below.

buy now amazon

You’re also invited to visit my web site, BROKEN GLASS, or like my Book of Face page. You can also follow my shorter ramblings on The Twitter.

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Comments posted below will be read, greatly appreciated and perhaps even answered.